Holy crap, that's PERFECT!!!! Excuse me while I gush all over you....
--I LOVE the idea of Rebecca and Carmelita being old friends from school (probably high school or college?). It really fits them.
--Molly dragging Kit to the office to show him "Danger Woman" is so cute. I don't remember if Talespin ever showed/described what Danger Woman looked like, but I can imagine Carmelita fitting the bill.
--Since Penelope and Wildcat are buddies in this AU, I imagine her having conflicting feelings about stealing that cane from Higher-4-Hire. And I get the impression that, in your story (which, again, is AWESOME) Wildcat doesn't know that Penelope is a part of the Cooper Gang.
--I LOVED how you had Molly peg Penelope as a girl at first glance. Talespin made Molly out to be very perceptive about people. So it makes sense for her to notice something like that.
....now I'm consumed with the desire to make this into a comic or a storybook type thing. If I ever do it and get it on DA, I promise to credit you!!!
Thank you so much!! I LOVED it!! I had a bad day at work and coming home to this REALLY cheered me up. **hugs**
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Date: 2013-10-08 06:04 am (UTC)--I LOVE the idea of Rebecca and Carmelita being old friends from school (probably high school or college?). It really fits them.
--Molly dragging Kit to the office to show him "Danger Woman" is so cute. I don't remember if Talespin ever showed/described what Danger Woman looked like, but I can imagine Carmelita fitting the bill.
--Since Penelope and Wildcat are buddies in this AU, I imagine her having conflicting feelings about stealing that cane from Higher-4-Hire. And I get the impression that, in your story (which, again, is AWESOME) Wildcat doesn't know that Penelope is a part of the Cooper Gang.
--I LOVED how you had Molly peg Penelope as a girl at first glance. Talespin made Molly out to be very perceptive about people. So it makes sense for her to notice something like that.
....now I'm consumed with the desire to make this into a comic or a storybook type thing. If I ever do it and get it on DA, I promise to credit you!!!
Thank you so much!! I LOVED it!! I had a bad day at work and coming home to this REALLY cheered me up.
**hugs**