Fan-comic: Shaggy and Velma's first fight

It's been WAY too long since I sat down and spent over an hour on a comic. It felt SOOOO good to kick back and do it again today! I don't even care that the end result isn't very polished. XD

This was originally written as a general-universe comic (i.e. not tied into any specific Scooby canon). But it can also be seen as an alternate version of Mystery Incorporated's 4th episode (the one where Velma nags Shaggy to change his eating habits and eat healthier food). Since I rip on Mystery Incorporated a lot for f**king up that relationship; I think it's only fair that I offer up solutions instead of just sitting at my desk yelling at the internet. ~_^

Anyhoo, I think Velma would have come off as a lot more reasonable and sympathetic if that conflict had played out more like this:
( Comic under the cut.... )

Fan-comic: Shaggy and Velma's first fight

It's been WAY too long since I sat down and spent over an hour on a comic. It felt SOOOO good to kick back and do it again today! I don't even care that the end result isn't very polished. XD

This was originally written as a general-universe comic (i.e. not tied into any specific Scooby canon). But it can also be seen as an alternate version of Mystery Incorporated's 4th episode (the one where Velma nags Shaggy to change his eating habits and eat healthier food). Since I rip on Mystery Incorporated a lot for f**king up that relationship; I think it's only fair that I offer up solutions instead of just sitting at my desk yelling at the internet. ~_^

Anyhoo, I think Velma would have come off as a lot more reasonable and sympathetic if that conflict had played out more like this:
( Comic under the cut.... )